Road Apples Almanac

I got it in my head i wanted to redraw a Little Orphan Strip in my style, so not owning a collection I scoured the internet and chose the one above. I do stuff like this from time to time but havent posted them here. How do you like the changes i made? Changing the 1920’s slang to a more readable modern speak? I thought getting rid of the policeman and giving his line to the beatup boy added humpur, did it?